This is such a powerful piece. I love how it chronicles the relationship between Lilly and Akira and the struggles they endured together. I'm glad I found your works though Thanatos02's Akira Route. Thanks so much!
Found Emi to be my second favorite, because it was well written and she's just a lovable person. Hanako's would be my third; thought the way they handled her ending (minus the controversial sex scene) was very well done. Rin's the fourth and poor Shizune coming in last, which is a shame since I really did like her as a character.
Overall loved the game so much, I replayed Lilly's route and am sad that it's come to an end. Also sad there wasn't more Akira <.<